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Sam is sixteen years old teenager and a skater. He hates maths and his idol is Tony Hawk- a world-famous skateboarder. Alicia is a girl who mean something to him, but with all that start problems he had never thought about
Silja
Nice humor in some posts! Especially the last post in the bottom :D
ReplyDeleteI like the story style. The characters look kinda homeys, which is cool. It was nice to read it.
ReplyDeleteVery good usage of slang. I also like the posts because they are not dull and boring. But i do not understand why you chose so weird book.
ReplyDeleteI liked it. Fakewall was very realistic, all the characters had their own style and it felt like I was reading a real facebook wall. Also humour made it more fun to read.
ReplyDeleteIt was realistic, the characters were young and that's something you can understand while reading the posts. And this Triumfo Tel Amor post was my total favourite.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you wrote! You forgot to change that evey comment was posted 6 hours ago ;)
ReplyDeleteIt was good that you used slang, so it made it look realistic but it wasn't very diverse.
ReplyDeleteShe used everyday language, which made the presentation realistic and it looked like real facebook profile.
ReplyDeleteI truly liked that you used informal language. It made the fakewall believable. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI really like your wall, beacause there are a lot of jokes(might consider for the funniest wall) and that everyday language made it look real. You have done great job with this wall!
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ReplyDeleteI liked that there were a lot of posts but i think there should have been a little more comments. Slang made it very interesting to read and also, like others said - it looked real.
ReplyDeleteThe posts were realistic, like real people would have them. There were some jokes that made the wall more interesting to read. But there were some little grammar mistakes, but not many. Overall nicely done.
ReplyDeleteIt was funny that in one post you mentioned Estonian chocolate brand Kalev. You have used a nice language style which suited with the storyline perfectly.
ReplyDeleteYou write like a skater. Perhaps skateboarding is something you are destined to do.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree, it's one of the funniest Walls - connecting the plot with real life works well. Lots of effort has been made to create the wall. The negative side is some grammar mistakes, especially the use of articles. Mark: 5/4
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