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I can not tell much about the character but she is a young artist who moves back to London after her bad relationship. She is doubtful of everithing and at the beginnin lives in illusion. She does not know who she really is then, she says at the beginning of the book, that she do not recognize herself anymore because she has changed everything about herself, she also names her Kate instead of Cate whitch is her real name.
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Beginning seemed to be a bit of hard and depressing on her but seeing in the end of the fakewall that she went into a relatsionship I think it will end very well for her :)
ReplyDeleteVery properly written fakewall: Many and many comments after posts, nicely written(casual style).
ReplyDeleteI like that there are some very beautiful pictures and some comments that almost make you dream:)
ReplyDeleteThe pictures were really beautiful. Nicely done, I can see that Reini has been working hard on that wall, because there are lots of posts and comments.
ReplyDeleteFakewall is long, but it is very interesting to read, because there are different kinds of posts, like photos and also a lot of conversation.
ReplyDeleteComments after posts gave more emotions and thoughts. Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou have waisted a lot of time to make it and the result is perfect! Whole fall is very good, from the beginning to the end.
ReplyDeleteVery well done and diverse.
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting to read. Seemed like a real facebook wall. She had put a lot of effort in doing this. Very good!
ReplyDeleteThe presentation is thoroughly done. It was easy to read.
ReplyDeleteThere were few grammar mistakes, but overall it turned out great wall!
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to understand what is happening. There are comments based on the events that are happening in her life, but there is no information given what those events are. But on the other hand the grammar is quite nice and the wall is finished.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, there are quite a lot of grammar/spelling mistakes (do/to, effect/affect, so/such, libraries, each other, etc.) But other than that, it is a nice wall - I like the pictures, the many comments, etc. But as someone commented above, it isn't very clear what she is doing/finding out - but maybe it is best to leave something revealed. Mark: 5/4
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